M4 Commentary: Retrospective on the First Half

I’m more or less using this site to host the second draft of a novel while I write it, under the guise of a weekly web series. Eventually I hope to clean up the text and see if I can get it published for realsies, or self-publish it on Amazon, or something. (Many publishers won’t consider anything previously posted online, but I’ll burn that bridge when I come to it.)

The first half definitely needs cleaning up. I included everything I wanted to write about—but I still need to make it good.